The Market List Interviews
Q & A with Dale L. Sproule
and Sally McBride
by Shauna Skye
(from The Market List #7)
The
following interview is with Dale L. Sproule and Sally McBride,
both editors of the magazine TransVersions.
FIRST,
A BRIEF RUNDOWN ON TRANSVERSIONS
The
first issue of the magazine appeared in the Fall of 1994,
and was inspired largely by the "many difficulties encountered
by both Dale and Sally during the process of actually getting
published". The two wished to create a market for cross-genre
material, since very few magazines were open to that.
"Too
many (well-respected) editors were getting away with making
vague promises of publication - holding huge backlogs of
stories for up to five years and never following through,
etc. We would talk about how it could and should be done
better and finally decided to show everybody how it's done,"
says the two.
Looking
back, however, they admit to mistakes as well. Their first
issue was in many ways a disaster with outrageous printing
costs and a slew of format problems. Their print run was
too high and they lost over $1,000 right off.
"On
the good side, we had coaxed some fine stories and poems
from well known contributors including Charles de Lint &
Michael Coney...plus a couple of rising stars like David
Nickle & Sean Stewart," says Dale. They also managed
to receive some worthy reviews, with a number of the first
issue's stories being recommended by Ellen Datlow in Year's
Best Fantasy & Horror.
By
their second issue Dale and Sally cut the print run and
cost, and went for a colour cover. They featured fiction
from Eileen Kernaghan and Steve Carper, and later ran stories
from Nebula Winner Robert J. Sawyer, Robert Levy, Stepan
Chapman and a novel excerpt from Sean Stewart. They've been
on the final ballot for three Aurora Awards.
Both
Sally and Dale have their own interesting biographies with
a string of writing credits. It is a pleasure to be able
to present them in this interview.
SHAUNA:
Sally, let's start with you. Why don't you begin by telling
a bit about your writing. I understand you've been published
in Asimov's, F&SF, among others. How did
you begin, and how long have you been at it?
SALLY:
I've been at it, off and on, for about 15 years, which seems
like an awfully long time. But I've spent way too long during
those years waiting for the muse to strike. (Plus raising
my kids - a son, 24, who is working on a doctoral degree
in astronomy, and a daughter, 22, who is entering the world
of business; plus all the usual stuff, like working, getting
divorced, moving from Edmonton to Victoria, meeting my husband
Dale, etc...) But I digress.
I began when my mother said something like, "I enjoy your
letters so much, have you ever thought of trying to write
stories or poems?" To please Mom, who is a poet, I tried
writing in the style of Alice Munro, the quintessential
"Canlit" (Canadian literary) writer, but failed badly when
all my stories kept mutating into sf. My first "real" story
was a 10,000 word effort in the Star Trek universe, and
it was terrible. I did everything that beginners usually
do to make the story dreadful--but I had loads of fun doing
it!
Over the years since then, I've learned a lot. I joined
a couple of workshops in Edmonton and Victoria, and read
as much as I could, both fiction in and out of the genre
and how-to-write books, and kept at it. My first sale was
to the anthology Tesseracts, edited by the great
Judith Merril. I was walking on air for days. Then I did
a collaborative story with Alan Dean Foster, called "Dance
on a Forgotten Shore" which appeared in F&SF
when it was edited by Ed Ferman. This story made it to the
Nebula Preliminary ballot, and got some Hugo votes as well.
The Canadian magazine On Spec started up, and I sold
them several stories. Matrix, a respected literary
magazine in Canada, bought a fantasy piece, and a science
fiction novelette, "The Fragrance of Orchids", went to Asimov's
and got some Nebula nominations. That story won me Canada's
Aurora award in 1995, and remains one of my favourites.
Since then I've sold horror pieces to Dead of Night,
Northern Frights, and others, and science fiction
to Tesseracts 5, ComputorEdge magazine and
others. I've also done some non-fiction writing (hey, it
pays better) and some teaching at a local writing school.
SHAUNA:
Dale, you've taught courses in writing for radio. That sounds
interesting. What's that all about?
DALE:
It's not as interesting as it sounds. I was a radio copywriter/creative
director for 20 years - and for the most part, all I wrote
was ads. I had two radio plays produced, one was broadcast,
and I wrote some music trivia features. But in the course,
what I taught was ad writing. I'd say it's had a long-term
negative effect - by making me think in 30 second sound
bites - a handicap when you're trying to write a novel,
believe me! It's hard to wrap your head around a novel,
but short stories give me little payoffs and satisfactions
along the way. The first "novel" I will actually finish
is actually a story cycle...a bunch of interconnected stories
that come together to form a coherent storyline. I'm almost
finished the fourth story, which is chronologically, the
first story ( "Razorwings", which appeared in Terminal
Fright #11 this past spring, will show up near the end
of the book).
SHAUNA:
Tell us about your illustrations, Dale!
DALE:
Art has always played a part in my life. When I enrolled
in university, creative writing and visual art were in different
faculties, so I had to choose between them. I had better
marks in creative writing (which is what I eventually got
my degree in), so art got put on the back burner. When I
first got involved in the small press, I found out that
there was a bigger demand for artists than there was for
writers, so I started doing a bit on the side. I did some
work for a number of respected horror mags, including Noctulpa
and New Blood, but most of my artwork simply wasn't very
good. Around that time, I had a couple of 'breakthrough'
(yeah, right) story sales, and because in the first throes
of fatherhood, I decided once again to concentrate on writing.
The artwork never completely stopped, though. I did a fair
amount of painting (in little bursts), to placate my visual
side. But I probably didn't do another drawing or illustration
(except studies for the paintings) until we started TransVersions.
At first, there were very few responses to our call for
artists...aside from the usual small press suspects - and
one of the things I really wanted TransVersions to
be, was visually different and striking. So, I found myself
filling in the gaps, illustrating stories we couldn't find
other artists for. That's when I discovered computer art.
Using Programs like Photo-Shop and Corel Photo-Paint, I
could do collages of my own work. If I wasn't happy with
the face, I'd find a photograph, do some photo-manipulation
and drop it in. The more I've done, the better I've become.
I was very flattered when Charles de Lint (presumably on
the basis of an illustration I had in TransVersions
#1, where Charles had a poem), recommended me to John Pelan
to do the frontispiece for the Darkside press re-issue of
Mulengro. I've also recently had work in.bodlital
Deathrealm, Terminal Fright, I've done a cover
for TransVersions and have been asked by another
author to illustrate his chapbook. It's been both gratifying
and fun.
SHAUNA:
Which comes easier for you, writing or illustrating? Which
has been the most rewarding for you?
DALE:
Illustrating is FAR easier. Which, I suppose, has something
to do with why writing is more gratifying. They both come
from completely different parts of the brain, even though
I have been told many times that I write very visually.
I wrote an entire novel last year and essentially had to
throw out all 125,000 words and started again.
SHAUNA:
As editors, what pet peeves (if any) do you have regarding
submissions?
SALLY:
Oh-oh, watch out, I'm about to dump all over you... but
no, I'll try to be nice. I guess my peeves fall into two
main categories. Number one, the picky grammatical stuff.
Please, people! Learn to write correctly in your own language,
for God's sake! Find out how to form a plural possessive,
and learn what a misplaced modifier is! Discover the wonders
of punctuation! I've been turned off more manuscripts because
of silly errors of basic composition than almost anything
else, because it indicates to me that the writer is an amateur.
Number two, a good idea crippled because of a lack of...
how shall I say it? Ballsiness? Chutzpa? Breadth of imagination
and spirit? Also, nice treatments of ideas that were good
'uns thirty years ago. Read up, folks; speculative fiction
has come a long way since Asimov, Clarke and Heinlein. But
I must say that the overall quality of submissions we get
is high and getting higher.
DALE:
Peeves? Lots of little things, like people who use a hundred
miniature paperclips where one big one would do. While that
does irritate me, it doesn't effect the possibility of a
sale. One common mistake submittors make which might actually
hurt their chance of selling us the story - is neglecting
to put the word count on the ms. We know exactly how much
room we have in each issue. If we were weighing two stories
of equal merit - where one story has a word count and fits
perfectly and the other one doesn't have a word count...we
may not go to the trouble of doing your count for you. We'd
just take the one we know will fit. Then there's the people
who attach US postage to their SASEs. We are in another
country. The Canadian Post Office will not accept letters
mailed from here with "foreign" postage. So it either costs
us money to send or sits in our files until the author inquires
(this is where putting an e-mail address on your ms comes
in handy-so we can contact you and let you know if we run
into this sort of problem). Another thing that's been happening
frequently is people sending their poetry to us in Victoria.
Our poetry editor, Phyllis Gotlieb (poetry submission address:
19 Lower Village Gate, #706, Toronto, ON, CANADA M5P 3L9)
is 2,000 miles away, in Toronto and it costs us money to
forward poems to her.
SHAUNA:
What is your second novel about, Sally?
SALLY:
I hesitate to say it's an X-Files rip-off, because it's
not. I like the X-Files TV show, but did not want to try
to sell a tie-in novel based on the show. However, I loved
the concept of two people (and their sexual tension) getting
involved in weirdness of that sort of metaphysical, spooky
kind. My tale is more science-fictional than horror, and
is set in several locations in Canada. I intend to draw
on the expertise of my astronomer son and physicist daughter-in-law
for up-to-date realism, and my own interest in psychological
twistiness for darkness and tension.
SHAUNA:
How would you describe TransVersions to someone who
has never seen it?
SALLY:
I guess I'd call it weird literary, or slightly high-brow
funkiness, or maybe just "Try it and you'll see what we
mean." We aim for a mix of stories from fun to challenging,
from horror to humour to brainy sf to gorgeous fantasy...
plus world-class illustration, poetry selected by the great
Phyllis Gotlieb, video reviews, thoughtful editorials and
whatever other delights we can cook up. We love our magazine
(Dale's brain-child), and more and more people are discovering
it and loving it too.
DALE:
It's a digest sized magazine filled with some really fine
'literature of the fantastic'--stories run the gamut from
sweet and funny to brutal and scary. The Locus review
of #4 said "frequently charming and elegant". Transversions
has a unique look - expressionistic artwork that captures
the mood of the story more than illustrating it in the classic
sense, plus some jazzy colour covers. I'd also brag that
we've had many rave reviews. My favourite related anecdote
is when we were interviewed for a local arts magazine and
the interviewer said, "I never read fantasy and science
fiction, but if it's all like this, I'm going to start."
SHAUNA:
How many submissions do you receive in an average month?
SALLY:
Depends on the season, actually. I think people make New
Year's resolutions to write, so we get more in the spring.
An average would be about 80. We purchase about 2 or 3%
of what we see.
SHAUNA:
Most of our readers are aspiring writers. What advice can
you give those starting out? Is there a formula for getting
published?
DALE:
There's certainly no formula with us. Although there are
certain things we look for and other things that we have
knee-jerk reactions against. For me, the thing I least like
to see is lack of imagination. If your stories must deal
with tropes like vampires and werewolves, at least find
a new angle. Good writing can make even the most cliched
idea work, but really stylish writing is one thing we don't
see much (except from writers we've courted).
My advice: read lots of books - figure out what you like
about other writers' styles, subject matter etc. Don't be
afraid to imitate other writers - but don't focus on any
one writer or any one genre, for that matter. Consult Anne
Rice for setting and Dickens for character and Tim Powers
for his audacious imagination and Harlan Ellison for his
power and Hemingway for succinctness and William Gibson
for his edgy, articulate voice etc. But don't lose sight
of the fact that your final objective is to develop and
hone your own voice. And the only way you can do that is
by practising. Write at every opportunity, work hard to
develop your own unique style. And don't be afraid to rewrite
often and drastically. I'd much rather see an ambitious
failure than a story which works, but has nothing special
to recommend it.
SALLY:
Well, as to formula, there's the old fave "Write, finish
what you write, and send it out." I would add "Re-write
and polish until you can honestly say you're proud of your
story." Write what feels right to YOU, and let your own
"voice" come through. It will, after you have got past trying
to become a clone of your favourite author. (Go ahead and
be inspired by the greats, but aim for a unique vision.)
If you pay attention to story structure (all those things
they teach you in how-to-write books and courses about plot,
character, theme, mood, etc., etc.) you're off to a good
start. Don't get carried away with the wonderful wittiness
of your deathless prose and forget to take advice from sympathetic
readers and editors who may see your work before it is ready.
If feedback is offered, listen to it, weigh it, and try
to be honest with yourself. Learning to self-edit is hard,
but remember: you'll never use up all the words in the dictionary.
More ideas and images will come if you let them, and they
will come faster if you court them by observing, learning,
listening and thinking.
SHAUNA:
If there's anything else you'd like to say, please do so.
The floor is yours.
DALE:
If we were to rate every story we received on a scale of
1 to 10, there would be more 5s and 6s than anything else.
We receive very few genuinely poor stories. But just because
your story is well done doesn't mean that we or any other
editor will buy it. It must stand out from all the other
stories and demand to be bought.
Copyright © 1996 by Shauna Skye. All Rights Reserved.
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